HAPPY FATHER’S DAY

To all of you,who are with their dad

What are you waiting for?

Go tell that you love him

If not words, say it from eyes

He needs that too

To all of you who are away from their father

Be patient

A hug will be worth the wait

To all of you who have lost their dad

Dont worry

He is with you on every step of life

To all of you who have issues with their father

Never forget

He wishes only good for his child

To all of you, whose father told them bad

things that made you feel worse

Forgive them

they are humans too

To all of you,who are in whatever situation with their father

Accept that and try to make peace with it

Before finishing….

To all of you who are father’s

We want to let you know that

We love you

We look up to you in the most unimaginable ways

Thank you for loving, protecting and forgiving us

This is my very first attempt at writing a poetry. Please help me improve by sharing your opinion and views in comments.

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19 responses to “HAPPY FATHER’S DAY”

  1. Superb..touching..

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  2. Isha & Vimal.... Avatar
    Isha & Vimal….

    To all who know me in this world, I want to tell you that Sakshi is the best daughter and a sensible girl. You truly are an angel beta….

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    1. So sweet of you! Thank you so much!πŸ˜‡β€οΈ

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  3. For Father son & daughter is reflection of his body whom he want to care , grow and shape up life at its best of it !

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  4. Nice try
    Loved it ❀
    And so very true πŸ‘
    And finally back to write wonderful blogs for us πŸ˜‰

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    1. Yes! Thank you for sharing your views! πŸ˜„

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    Yernasia Quorelios

    πŸ’œ My Dad is Dead EveryOne; it, His Death pleases πŸ™πŸΏ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜‘ 😀 😐 πŸ™„ πŸ™πŸΏ Me EveryBody

    …πŸ’›πŸ’šπŸ’™…

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  6. Amazing work πŸ‘πŸ‘.
    Writing a poetry is not a piece of cake but you did it excellently.

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    1. Thank you for your kind words! πŸ˜‡

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  7. Beautifully penned! πŸ™‚

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    1. Thank you for reading!πŸ˜„

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      1. My pleasure πŸ™‚
        Do check out my latest blog posts too and pour in your valuable opinions…

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  8. Well done πŸ‘
    First attempt of writing ✍️ poem on Father’s Day

    Amazing words πŸ‘Œ

    Best ever gift 🎁 on Father’s Day from lovely and sweet daughter

    Keep writing ✍️

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    1. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it! πŸ˜„πŸ˜‡πŸ€—πŸ§

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  9. Short, sweet and simple. Definitely helps get the message delivered, I liked it! For the tips- I would say maybe explore more words which u could use to replace the simple words with, basically better vocabulary would help.
    ❀️

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    1. Yeah! Working on it already! Thank you for your sharing your ideasπŸ˜„πŸ€—β€οΈ

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  10. Well done dear
    Nice try and best topic also
    😊😊

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